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Darkness by ~Bankotsuluva7:iconBankotsuluva7:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


DARKNESS (9/20th/05)

Inside my mind is a dark room
Inside that room is a dark corner
Inside that corner lies me
Standing in a black sea
A sea of my thoughts
Where I can be free…or at least I thought that for a moment
A moment to be free is what I thought it would be
Until the darkness, decided to consume me…
©2006-2010 ~Bankotsuluva7
:iconbankotsuluva7:

Author's Comments

i wrote this sept 20th 2005, i guess it was another one of my dark moments, its not a very long poem its pretty darn short but i just felt like putting up cause my scanners broken and i cant put any of my new pics up untill its fixed!!!
anyways i hope you like it, please comment ^_^ and check out my gallery if u havent been there ^_^

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~lm0989 Aug 7, 2006, 8:50:41 AM
wow! Very good.

Even though its short its powerful it has a lot of meaning

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I love dragons
Sanity is overrated
98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy
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!TheLaStHero Aug 8, 2006, 5:03:05 AM
i like it.

but i do not fear the darkness...muhahhah
very good poem man.

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To follow the Hero Lore, its to finally accept what you always knew
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~Bankotsuluva7 Aug 9, 2006, 11:14:22 AM
Thank you! i kinda thought the same thing, i was like, well its better to put a short poem up thats got mean and get shot down by people then put up a long ass poem with no meaning ya know! im glad you like it, thank you!

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"life is just a dream and when you wake up u die"
"if we walk around half asleep all the time why is it so hard to reach our dream."- i donno
-98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy
:iconbankotsuluva7:
Mood: Humor ~Bankotsuluva7 Aug 9, 2006, 11:41:56 AM
thanks im glad you do!
uh huh.. not afraid of the darkness..sureee..just kidding
you do realize im not a guy right? or do u just say that to everybody?
cuz last time u called me dude! im just wondering..lol

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"life is just a dream and when you wake up u die"
"if we walk around half asleep all the time why is it so hard to reach our dream."- i donno
-98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy
:iconthelasthero:
!TheLaStHero Aug 13, 2006, 9:41:11 AM
lol na, i know your not a guy..i just carelessly throw the word dude around XDDD

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To follow the Hero Lore, its to finally accept what you always knew
:iconbankotsuluva7:
~Bankotsuluva7 Aug 14, 2006, 8:33:09 AM
lol, oky just making sure ^_^

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"life is just a dream and when you wake up u die"
"if we walk around half asleep all the time why is it so hard to reach our dream."- i donno
-98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy
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